Sarah Pass

Hi mistymoo! I thought this reminded me way to much of Lady Gaga or Jay Sean. But this could be what your going for, and if it is you can ...

Hi Lacey! I have to say first that you sound like such a survivor! But I'm not sure if for you to tell what happened to you would be to ...

This is awesome! Even though there are a few things I think could make it even better I think this a roaring fire in "it" should not be at the ...

This is a really good start! Though there were a couple of typos "I finally started on." On should be one. " "Another bony hand found its way to my ...

Hey I'm Sarah, and have been here since last November. I loved your story! It had me from begging,it reminded me a lot of Breaking Dawn which is a great ...

This is a good start! But I have a few suggestions to make. As soon as they starting talking to each other online they began liking each other. That happened ...

This was a great story! It had me from beginning to end. It might just be me but the part about the infant killing the father I didn't really get, ...

This beautiful! And so true! I connect with this poem because I'm a poet myself. You are so gifted and talented and what really impresses me is that you are ...

I love this poem!I feel the same way when I have to go back to school you do want to go back but at the same time you'll miss all ...

This poem is very sad and even a little should be more hopeful. Are you trying to say that life is meaningless? because if you are that's really sad because ...

I think this is a good start but I had a few questions. First why is it written in pink? its a little loud and could be straining on the ...

Great imagery! I think this is the first narrative poem I've read from this site and I must say how much I enjoyed it. It flowed nicely,there was no award ...

This poem is so awesome! I loved it from beginning to end,it flowed perfectly. Great imagery! I could see every thing the person was going through in my mind. It ...

I like sad but I found this a little on the depressing side, and I'm not sure if this belongs with romantic fiction. This character seems hopeless and like nothing ...

I like the idea, but somethings are out of place. Such as "why didn't he try?" should be after "he let me fall" and why would he watch if he ...